Today I’ll be talking about endings; very specifically about how to
reach them and why they’re important. My last post talked about having a
story board prepared for when you wrote short stories.
Logically there must be a final panel; this is your goal. The others
lead up to it – a charge or a creep towards an incredible crescendo (or a
credible one, if you prefer) – and you might find you can almost write
the story backwards.
I
don’t mean to be awkward with that statement – I have always found it
difficult to write a short story if I didn’t know where I wanted it to
go, so much so that I’ve often abandoned pieces I’ve
started or let the fall by the desk-side until I have more inspiration
for them. My normal technique is to envision how I want something to
progress – usually in the form of a story board – and then connect the
panels I created in my mind. I usually do this
backwards, working from the last panel back to the one before and
figuring out how that journey forms before going back to the step before
and doing the same again.
Some
people call this a ‘bad way to write’. Maybe for them it is; it works
for me. Sometimes I just make a few notes to describe how these panels
link – the tendons that bind the skeleton together,
if I continue using last post’s analogy – before moving back. I can
then build one these notes to literally flesh out the story, adding the
characters in and around the rest of it to give it life and power it
through its own story line. This is not to say,
of course, things cannot be edited and changed later – this is always,
always, always and option, as is a total rewrite or even abandonment if
you actually think you can’t finish a piece.
As
you can tell for me to make this process work the ending is very
important to keep in my mind, to know where and what everything is
building up to. It means I can drop in hints and twists that
stay consistent with the rest of the story, or sometimes it’s vital I
include them to maintain that consistency. Imagine a story where there
can be next to zero risk of inconsistency, or risk of it, in the early
chapters; this is achievable for me (or perhaps
just in my mind) because you’ve already written the ending and you can
tie in the beginning and middle straight away
because you know what will happen. You can plan the twists and
their results, you can choose ahead of time which characters will
die/betray the heroes, and you can embroil the reader in mysteries
knowing full well how they are resolved all with the confidence
of knowing how it ends.
A
story is certainly all about the journey, but without a target or goal
it’s not journeying too anywhere – this will come across in your
writing. If people finish it and say things like, “It’s
good, I like it, but I don’t know where it’s going,” take a step back
and ask yourself, “Do I know where it’s going?” Stories need to be going
somewhere, they need to have a point they’re driving at or towards,
otherwise they wander and meander and lose focus
(much like some of my blog entries). So make sure where you’re going
somewhere with your story, else you might find it goes nowhere.
This
doesn’t mean you have to know everything about the story to begin with,
not by a long way. Imagine you’re making a puzzle; it has irregular
sides and it’s got a lot of repeating patterns.
Not having an ending in mind is the same as not having a picture to
refer to while making a puzzle – you don’t know what your building up
to, it’s difficult to make a start and even if you do you are not always
sure what you’re doing is going to make sense
later on. You might even have to start again and after doing that
several times the idea of giving up seems like a really good one.
Giving up will not get your piece finished. Just think about that for a
little bit; it might be easier, but what does it achieve if you take the
‘easier’ route? It will not finish your short story.
It will not finish your play or script. It will not finish your novel.
Is it really the easier route to your goal or is it just less effort for
you in the immediate future? Less effort, by its very nature as a
practice, is unlikely to be more efficient in
achieving your goal than putting more effort in – I think it is in fact
a more difficult endeavour to finish a piece by not writing it than by
actually getting on with it. By that token, the easier route or method
to finishing your script/story/novel/masterpiece
is definitely to sit down and write it. Not all in one sitting, but bit
by bit, and never forgetting where you want it to end up.
This
doesn’t mean you have to know everything about the story from the
start. It doesn’t mean the ending is set in stone. You can change the
ending, sculpt it as your story evolves, make it the
most perfect and dramatically appropriate ending you can as you find
out more and more about your characters. But have an ending in mind.
Remember, you can’t complete a quest without being told where to go and
what to do. So set your goal and bring on The
End.
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